Great painting hampered by poor photograph
Please please please take a better photograph of your painting. The background is just way too distracting. The easiest thing for you to do is upload the painting in photoshop, and crop out all the extra image.
yeah your right about that I should of, but was so quick to put it up...
but thanks though
Very good, however it needs a few tweaks.
I really like your digital painting. It has very great color and contrast.
The one thing that immediately comes out is the perspective of the face. I'm not going to point them out, (otherwise it's the only thing people will look at. As a former portrait artist I notice these things immediately), however the easiest way to fix this would be to take a photo of yourself at that angle, and adjust the image accordingly. If you need a hint feel free to send me a PM.
Otherwise very good. I like how your images are becoming more sharp.
I like your artwork. One thing that will help is if you either rearrange your composition, or reduce the darkness of your image. Too much of your detail is completely lost due to this. The image is a little top-heavy because of the blank space above the figure. Granted this creates "coming from the shadows", but I still think you can push the contrast.
I wasn't really looking for a critique but ok.
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