Very good, however it needs a few tweaks.
I really like your digital painting. It has very great color and contrast.
The one thing that immediately comes out is the perspective of the face. I'm not going to point them out, (otherwise it's the only thing people will look at. As a former portrait artist I notice these things immediately), however the easiest way to fix this would be to take a photo of yourself at that angle, and adjust the image accordingly. If you need a hint feel free to send me a PM.
Otherwise very good. I like how your images are becoming more sharp.